All Comments on 'Forced Ch. 02'

by sexychik69

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Fan-fucking-tastic!

I love the tone, her combination of desire and apprehension all overseen by the firm intent of her powerful man. Can't wait to see how Will plays out in this scenerio. The only thing this story is missing is some good ass fucking, but it appears I'll find that in the bookends - I stumbled into this chapter, now I need to find the rest. Way to go SexyChik! You don't rush too quickly through the actions and give a nice level of detail. (I guess you could say, "she gives good detail"). Now I can't wait to see how you handle the details of our heroine's anal plundering.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

bit better than ch 1 at least thers a bit of sex in it other than a load of brutality but the bloke as in ch 1 still need a fucking bullet through his very sick head and the idea that a woman would be turned on by this (no) might die of fright but not turned on. i reckon the only one turned on by this made up crap is the author

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