All Comments on 'Forced to Change Ch. 41'

Why so rushed? This is the ending? No final confrontation with Jorge? No payback for the rapes, drugs, beatings, scat, constant public humiliations? Jorge is just already dead, Donnelly's behind everything because he's just randomly crazy and possessively infatuaded with Katie which wasn't even hinted at before, Lana's only punishment is to do prison time, Jared gets over his psychopathy by being in love, and Katie gets over her year of being tortured and debased to near-death by being in love. This isn't good writing and it's not really satisfying considering how long ago you introduced this story. It kind of feels like you just were tired of the project and wanted to stop people expecting more entries.

Wish it wasn't 1 chapter page a time.

Thank you so much for finishing the story. Although I would have liked at least the epilogue expanded I'm glad that Katie and Jared/Karen and Drew had their happy ending!