All Comments on 'Forever My Love Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

Too long for the story to be left on a cliffhanger. This sucks.

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

Honestly, the thought of an innocent child in the hands of a psychopath like Jim scares the hell out of me. I hope this isn't going to be another one of your long-drawn-out stories about hair styles and fancy clothes that ends with death and misery for all of the good characters at the hands of the really despicable ones. FF

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

nice one just like your other stories. looking forward to the next chapter.

ToliviaTolivia11 months ago

Please post the next chapter 🙏🏾🙏🏾 I’m a huge fan of all your stories

ToliviaTolivia11 months ago

Jeez it’s so awesome, you’re the best Vanalas

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Hurry up with the next chapter can’t wait

BarefootmarvellBarefootmarvell11 months ago

Hi Vanalas thank you for a come back on this storyline I can't wait for chapter 3. I have enjoyed all your stories thanks bud

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

please go on with the next chapter...too hard a time to wait

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