All Comments on 'Forever My Love Ch. 03'

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Dpj49Dpj4910 months ago

I don’t know why I even read this. I hate the anger and despair I feel afterwards. Absolutely great storytelling. I am ready for some JUSTICE and happiness.

dnsontndnsontn10 months ago

Delicious drama …

canndcannd10 months ago

I expressed my dismay at the ending of the story that tells their past. You deserve an award for creating the mega villain of the century. I mean do these characters get worse ? I'm sure we'll find out that they took Ben's male child replacing it with a girl that was gone. The ultimate irony is that kids now in Davis home with an evil step parent just like poor Ben lived.

What would stop the sister from birdsong this bubble? Did she think he was dead and why keep the lie now?

I'm only reading in the hopes there is a really creative punishment for the bad characters. But really it's hard to get thru until then

BarefootmarvellBarefootmarvell10 months ago

I am loving the storyline so far it's getting interesting Vanalas. Could David's little son belong to Ben and David? I am eagerly waiting for chapter 5

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I have been successful probably because I have always realized that I knew nothing about writing and have merely tried to tell an interesting story entertainingly. My own experience is that once a story has been written, one has to cross out the beginning and the end. It is th...

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