by vanalas
I don’t know why I even read this. I hate the anger and despair I feel afterwards. Absolutely great storytelling. I am ready for some JUSTICE and happiness.
I expressed my dismay at the ending of the story that tells their past. You deserve an award for creating the mega villain of the century. I mean do these characters get worse ? I'm sure we'll find out that they took Ben's male child replacing it with a girl that was gone. The ultimate irony is that kids now in Davis home with an evil step parent just like poor Ben lived.
What would stop the sister from birdsong this bubble? Did she think he was dead and why keep the lie now?
I'm only reading in the hopes there is a really creative punishment for the bad characters. But really it's hard to get thru until then
I am loving the storyline so far it's getting interesting Vanalas. Could David's little son belong to Ben and David? I am eagerly waiting for chapter 5