All Comments on 'Forever Now'

Way long and a lot of detail. Didn’t finish it so it I didn’t rate it. What I did read was good and well written.

That story was ridiculously good! That epilog was spectacular! Although it did address some serious issue of rascism still relative and prominent in todays world it did not distract or take away from the story but rather inhanced showing a true story of love and dedication.

Bravo !⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

Great story. You are correct, Children are never born racist. Children want to play with other children, the color of their skin makes no difference. It us adults that teach them how to hate. Unfortunately here in the USA we are seeing a resurges of it being taught to our children, even in schools. Very Sad.

I really enjoy your stories, not a lot of drama and a lot of love and happiness. 5*

An unbelievably wonderful tale. Absolutely well written.

Your stories are brilliant thank you.

Wonderful story, long enough to be much more than just a wham-bam fuck story. An interesting look into the Australia of the past and it's struggle to become the great country it now is. It was nice that Mum and Dad didn't have to be killed off for them to live together, lol. Well written,

I feel a bit redundant in saying, yet again, that you’ve written a fantastic piece! The only way, in my opinion, that it could have been better is if the dad hadn’t made it and they became a triad.

Terrific story, beautifully covering sensitive cultural issues that beset modern societies even now. Their demise should be actively encouraged and supported..

Excellent story. I loved it. Thank you.

Fantastic, I do love to read stories set in my homeland with names I know. Another epic Aussie tale I will have to read again sometime. Thank you immensely for entertaining me once again. I look forward to something as good soon. So many authors from other countries use names and places that have no meaning to me and I wish they would sort of use something generic. Merry Christmas my good man and all the best for 2022.

Amazing story!!! Would love to see a part two.... Taking on the story when the kids are all of age.... Could be very very interesting!!!!

Been catching up on your work over the past few weeks, that this one has been just as great as the others. Immensely enjoying the actual love that you convey in your stories. Can't wait for what comes next.

You are an automatic read for me. Anything and any story. I absolutely love your stories. 10 stars. Likes the topics also. And of course the loving hot sex!

Very enjoyable. Sexy and intellectual at the same time!

I gave a 4. It's a good story, but the entire chan this and that language sounds very weebish, and I found the racist rant and part not giving anything of value to the story tbh.

This was freaking wholesome <3

TBH the story was good but when I come here I do like to leave political and divisive issues behind in the real world.

The story jumped way to quickly from brother sister who hadnt seen each other to full on sex and saying forever.

As always an amazing work that was a great read and a true favorite. wish I had half your skill.

Amazing. Great story. Loved it though mention of casual sex with others tick me off 😐

Great story. I would love a sequel

A really nice story as usual with your work. I have to agree with another comment about how quickly it jumped to them becoming lovers. The overall story was excellent work.

A great story, love it. AAAAAA++++++

Great story!! End dialogue on page 7 made no sense

Very good story. Thanks.

I wish you were my brother so we could have hot incestuous sex together

I'm a retired journalist/writer of 31 years, and I have but one comment on your story:

OUT FUCKING STANDING! An awesome piece of work! Nice job!

For a bloody bogun Aussie redneck your pretty bloody awesome Mate 😮😮😮 What I appreciate about your writing (other than the Aussie accent) is you understand how to build a story. So many amateur writers don't get the nuance of building character, dialigue and the story arch it's literally like a Lego set. Sure it's building blocks but it's about knowing where your going and how you want to get there and you do it so bloody well. Good on ya Cobber 😎😎😎

What an excellent story, by an excellent author. No irritating grammar, tenses, dialogue or typo's. Perhaps due to competent editor(s)? Revisiting after a year+, still tugs at the heart strings.

Fortunately you stopped short of anal on this one. Your score could have suffered severely should LIT have allowed a score in the negative figures such as -1.

AWAKADS

Yet another really enjoyable story from a really good author thank you.

Ive read literally hundreds and hundreds of stories on this site over the years and I must say this would be one of the best stories I’ve read. Well done mate… ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Another gem from the legend that is UltimateSin. I swear this guy cannot write a bad story. Every single one - EVERY SINGLE ONE - that I have read thus far always nails it. Every one of them has me emotional at some point throughout, often times shedding a few tears. I don't know how he does it but I hope he never stops cranking them out.

It was a little disappointing that she didn't save herself for him, given all the build up and the fact she'd been in love with him for so long. I thought that was what all that was for, to support that. It loses something in stories like these with this type of backstory when she fucks someone else despite being in love with another. For a story at least, and one with a backstory and build up like this, it would have just made more sense for me at least. Anyway, at least they ended up together so that's what really matters. I guess I've just been spoilt from some of the other stories I've read and I always hope for this special "bonus" to be present. I dunno I just feel it adds a certain extra to it, but maybe that's just me.

Anyway, top-tier story. The racism moments were very sad. I just can't understand how people can be so cruel and insensitive towards others they don't even know, especially such kind and innocent people that wouldn't harm a fly. I really hope this nonsense is one day eradicated completely, along with outdated views on incest and all that sort of shit. We need to encourage love; not hate.

I was expecting a build up... nope. Lol it was okay though.