All Comments on 'Forever Sisters'

by EbonCaine

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GlassOGlassOalmost 2 years ago

Great storytelling. Just sucks you in and makes it feel real. Well done.

SirDigbyChickenCaesarSirDigbyChickenCaesaralmost 2 years ago

Having lamented just the other day how good lesbian taboo stories are few and far between, I found this a welcome antidote. It's far too common for authors to write incest as a gimmick rather than the story's emotional core. Even accounting for the magical angle, there's a believability to Nina's internal struggle that I greatly admire: it's only a two-page read, but you've managed to distill a history of sexual tension into one afternoon without the resolution feeling convenient or rushed. MC's not my kink, but if your other stories are like this, where it's more nudging the players than puppeteering, I'll have to check them out.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Great story and I second everything GlassO wrote below. Thank you.

Aoife_from_UlsterAoife_from_Ulsteralmost 2 years ago

Excellent! Gripping from beginning to end.

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

So beautifully needy, driven, 'forbidden' found perfectly fitting... Please keep writing 🙂

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Hello there! My name is Ebon Caine, and I am a storyteller. As far back as I can remember, I have been allured by tales of twisted morality and mental domination. As time progressed and I began to find more and more of these fantasies roiling in my mind, I took to writing them...