by tony090909
Very hot and erotic...yea to the author for getting it right...keeping both couples together in the same room
My wife and I loved this story. It was pretty much the same as our first time wife swapping. However, afterwards as we talked, I shared that the most exciting part for me was simply seeing her drilled by another cock. And, the most exciting thing for her was fucking another man in front of me. Thus, while our first experience was swinging, we immediately settled into the hot wife-cuckold lifestyle. She has had everything from long term lovers to one-night stands.Your story was very exciting and well written. Thanks!
I think I'll have my wife take her panties off and give them to her lover in the restaurant the next time we have a date. That will be a sure fire signal huh?
Nice story, wife has taken her panties off in a restaurant, when only us two.
She allowed me to touch her, and slide one finger in. Dipped my finger
into my wine, and had a taste of pussy and wine, Nice
Your story is a dream come true. I showed it to my wife. She laughed. A couple of weeks later we went to dinner and next thing I see is her taking her panties off under the table. She puts them on the table as the waitress comes over . My wife tells her that I wanted to get into her panties. The waitress tells her she's one lucky woman to have a man who loves to wear panties. When she comes back with the bill she gives my wife a note. It has her phone number and says she would love to see me in panties if it's ok. She'll be here at eleven thirty tonight.
I've read a few of your stories now and I'm stuck by how little time is spent on the woman's pleasure. There's little foreplay, no oral, not even much breast play considering how much you emphasize how big they are. Also the grammatical errors are a distraction. Mostly verb tense. Overall storyline is good but for me there needs to be more teasing and buildup to rank as a
4 or better.
...hot! I love the pillow talk, too - that's such an erotic aspect of extramarital sharing.
Thanks for the comment saying it was believeable - that was something I was aiming for. Thanks also for the interesting suggestion regarding a sequel or prequel.
Tony,
A good story. I particularly like the bit where the wives remove their panties and subsequently get spanked. It is a pity that spanking videos do not have such an interesting story leading up to the spanking. I look forward to a sequel or perhaps a story of how Robert and Carole first got into spanking.
Great story.like the first time element of it,the fact that the two female charactrs had only been with 1 guy before is quite a turn on.Don't take notice of the negative comments,these people probably don't even have the balls to write stories of their own.
Keep them coming !
Loved your story. For the life of me I can't understand what is so morally wrong with consenting adults having sexual fun between themselves. I hope you're going to write some more similar stories in the future.
Still gave you 0 though.