All Comments on 'Forget to Remember Ch. 05'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

This chapter makes both Josh and Kell seem more real. It explained their behaviors and reactions to the events. My guess is that Owen won’t be around for very long but it’s a good step in Josh learning how to regulate his emotions. Well done.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Please...

Josh is hurting. Kills is hurting. If they could be brought back together, they could help each other, and they could realize that they could help each other. It could be the rekindling they need. They DO care for each other. Let them experience this.

Maybe they can eventually kiss, strip each other, explore Kell's maybe hairy blond chest hair... I am hoping for a kind and warm reconciliation!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

Very nicely done here.

KackyKackyabout 4 years ago

You seriously left us hanging for two years now with no ending....?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Please finish this story, I’m so invested in Kells and josh, don’t end it here..

Enlightened_SoulEnlightened_Soulabout 3 years ago

Ugh, serves me right for not checking that the story was finished before reading. I went though all that traumatic portion with no resolution. I wish there were warning on stories like this. So disappointing! :-(

Will1652Will1652almost 3 years ago

Please finish the story.

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