All Comments on 'Forgotten'

Liked the beginning. It had an interesting plot line.

You completely lost me in the last 6-8 lines.

It would have been much better to just be simple, instead of trying to be vague.

Good shot, maybe a second chapter, with a little slower development.

Absoutely loved it. Very well written, and vague enough to allow the reader to engage their imagination. I will read more of your stuff.

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Thank you author.

Great concept, but I've been sick and my thoughts and recall and imagination are crippled; I perceived very little more then what you wrote. Man cub-to-gentleman , right ? Liked it; and am continuing to read your stores.

What the heart wants the mind will find a way to have.

I guess I am kinda dense. I do not send any actual conclusion