All Comments on 'Fortune and Fortitude Pt. 02'

In today's world we all need examples of taking the higher road.

I want a path where he seduces succubi

I think his main mission should be for the humans, but eventually he will incorporate the others annika ria and jessica into their own roles within that plan. Although whatever he chooses should be because of Quinn, not just liking one of the proteges best.

I think he needs to define his own path.

Harem. Don’t make a good both and set up fall prisoner to an either or.

Let’s start with he and Quinn taking charge of this group.

He will win all three over and with Quinn take over and stop Armageddon

uniquely different to start. I hope the story stays interesting and it doesn't just become a sex-fest. The story is what makes it interesting.

A Religious demonic dragon sounds interesting. Make a knighthood order perhaps! I vote Kiara

At the expense of sounding overtly ambitious, how about all of them? Harem time! If not, I like the Ria path where he gets the two succubi. It would also fulfill the conditions for the incest tag of this story and since he already has Quinn I would like to see the story proceed that way. Harem time!

Kiera gets my vote

To agree with most other people ... all of them. They're not mutually exclusive, and would benefit from a combined version of all of them.

Ria's path is comfortably satisfied by being part of a larger harem, with the security of a strong and well fed Jared.

Annika sees life as a constant power struggle and wants to be on a side that indulges in power; she'll get all the sustenance she needs from a full harem

Interesting and unusual so far. I think he should go with both the Ria and Kiara options, as they are not mutually exclusive

None of the deals seem to go against each other so he could do all of them. If he controlled a territory he could protect Ria and Jessica while keeping humans in his territory safe for Kiara and the power of being the ruler of a territory would satisfy Annika. Best of all worlds and perfect start to his harem. 5/5

Just wondering why you kept having Quinn's age as almost *nineteen? What's with the asterisk? For my two cents worth, have Jared ally with Ria. Just cuz.

His own path so that He will win all three over and with Quinn take over and stop Armageddon

You should create an adult VN game with multiple branch storyline. You write good

I agree with privateperv. There’s no reason not to combine the deals

Great story! I think he should form a special alliance with all of them, where they take care of each other's needs - and of course find a way to provide Annika with the meat shen needs.

Can't wait for the next chapter!

A fun and original story. Well written, too. Would love to see him (well, Quinn) find a way to bring them all together. Looking forward to wherever you take it.

Kiarra is my favorite of the female demons so far, but I don’t hate the others yet either

Would love to learn that Quinn is a demon who complements Jared, making them a formidable force against the apocalypse. Also that they're pro human so I guess would join Kiara.

As this is in Romance, I differ from other commenters. Jared and Quinn need to be faithful to each other. No harem!

I highly believe Kiara is a good choice but Annika could also make that happen with Jared dicing up the competition for space to create his new apocalyptic paradise. With the others Jess and Ria also being by his side. So it boils down to all of em at the same time.

I also think he should try to combine all three paths instead of choosing one. I also hope that Quinn stays important to him and that he doesn't just turn into a sex crazed demon.

They all should form a team and fight to survive. Maybe Quinn is an demon too? Who knows...?

My thoughts are not Annika, but combine the other two under Quinn, maybe miss Senguine as well after they realise he is more powerful then they think

I think down the middle.... I think leaning to the good side. He is a demon after all. :P

Kiara's path of crusading for humans and standing up for something higher! 🤗

If he is really that powerful..

I say he take them all.

Wow, there simply is no real romance here............ do you even know how to romance someone? Wrong catagory........

It’s probably too late to be addressed but you need to get rid of this Christian shit and fast. I don’t want any of that crap in my freaking erotica. Him whining about premarital sex and how he must get married is annoying as hell. I know it’s a harem so he will be having polygamous relationships soon. But whining about not honoring his mother, and killing, and breaking the Christian law of no premarital sex is so effing grating I can’t stand it. Good other than the obnoxious Christian beliefs as a reason to pussyfoot around

He should take them all. That you are saying that he will not take them all on certain paths is a mistake in a good harem. It’s too late to be addressed but I find it insane that he wouldn’t take every protege in addition to senguine.

The shit with Christianity here is nonsense, I mean when you know no matter what you do it doesn't matter. You are out of the equation. You are not in that category why the fuck then you need to think that thing, I mean MC just looks stupid to me.

Great story. Interesting character development. Take it wherever you want it to go.