All Comments on 'Fortune Favours The Brave'

Very entertaining - I laiughed several times at the sly wit. Well done!

You have exceeded your last piece of writing. Bravo!

Funny and clever with quite a bit of naughtiness, bravo!

Well done! Your story brought a smile to my face, and joy in ... other places!

This was a good fun story.

While it had a nice buildup to the serendipitous sex, unfortunately the circumstances surrounding it prevented the actual sex scene from being as erotic as it might have been.

This one is a refreshing break from some of the darker LW stories in the contest. It’s a great story! 5* from me.

Thank you for writing, and thank you for sharing your work.

I don't quite understand how come why they made so much effort on the pictures, though. I admit that's nitpicky though. Five stars and good luck on the contest!

Kinda like an old fashioned panty raid. I liked how they stuck it to Mabel and Margaret. If he plays his cards right, Claire might make a good wife. It doesn't hurt that she apparently comes from money.

...but what on earth it's got to do with April Fool's Day is a complete mystery!

Isn't that appropriate for Literotica?!!

Paul in Oklahoma

Removing the last few chapters this would make a great introduction to a series. Dan fucking the whole dorm and orgies in his lodge

Really enjoyed it.

Claire's future partners-?!? Is he crazy-?? Fun-loving woman that knows what she wants, and gets it, quick-thinking, resourceful...

Definitely a keeper, and seems neither has any problems with the other's being free-spirited....

def going in Faves

Good story. Very entertaining. Thank-you

Cheeky and clever

This is, undoubtedly, one of the most delightful, civilised, witty, and erotihappy stories here on Literotica. Your writing is, as usual, impeccable, and the protagonists surprisingly believable. Do you think this could be required reading at St. Trinity's?

Fun story!

Great fun. Would think Claire and Dan could recreate the photos with Dan's new position.

Mfj

It's pretty much well-known fact that Viagra only works if you're stimulated, and a 19-year-old boy should not need Viagra, in fact it could be dangerous ,especially 2 .LOL.

Sorry though thanks for uploading.