All Comments on 'Forty Thousand or Bust'

Holy shit i fucking loved this, now I'm no professional or whatever, but this was really well laid out, and I thoroughly enjoyed this, so thank you, I'm glad I got a chance to read such a phenomenally well written story, thank you for putting your ideas and story out here!

Very well written except for a few wrong words and minor grammar errors. A decent editor would easily take care of that. Please keep writing.

T.

A lot of it was literally horrific everything with Taquan and Dougie’s sister - what a complete and utter evil bitch. In Lucie’s situation at some point I would have have told him what she did. After all he’d want to know why she never wanted to go near his sister ever again. Tbf I completely skipped past the section with Yvonne and Lucie’s second interaction. I don’t have any problems reading about girl on girl a lot of it is very sexy but their interactions were a complete turn off for me.

Even for a fantasy I thought she was incredibly unlikely that she would ever put those chains back on again, that’s just from a trauma standpoint. That said you handled that aspect of it pretty well. I’m all in favour of enjoying your chosen kinks.

Overall I really enjoyed the story and I’m looking forward to reading more of your writing in the future. Thanks for writing and sharing!

Tess (UK)