All Comments on 'Forty Years Later'

Your grammar, spelling, etc were okay in this story.

I appreciate that you kept your short story to one page but ...

This story had too many words, not enough action and action need not be sexual.

This opinion is based on only one of your stories. Maybe the others will be more interesting.

That's two of your stories.

And two "eager beaver" women.

If you have extras, please give them my contact info? :+))

I'm adjusting to your "too precisely articulated" style.

It does make for easier reading...:+))

More please about this couple.