All Comments on 'Found Pt. 07'

The most sorry excuse of a male.. outside of money i cant see anything atractive to women. Wwhitout his money everyone will not have take a second look at him Sara said it best. He is a child and needs some raising. Dropped

I can see the light at the end of the tunnel. You really got my imagination going when you mentioned the alternate ending before the story started, it has me even more engrossed in the story of that is even possible. I will say him having the strap on used in him is really a turn off, just my own opinion.

1) Steve throws Sara to two waiters in public place while she is undressed and exposed. That's Love?? Then Steve gets mad about it.

2) Telling readers what characters are feeling after the fact is confusing and backwards.

3)The only consistency in the story was they all acted like drugged up, bipolar paranoid schizophrenics.

I am really enjoying the entire story arc and do not want it to end!!

Steve needs psychiatric help, badly. Where is Jenny? This story needs her to come back strong.

I like the story but this isn't the first time you've had the women that supposedly love him practically rape him with a strap-on. The second time after he specifically says he doesn't like pain, they abuse the fuck out of him. Once was enough, twice ya lost me...sadly won't be finishing this one - that isn't love, it's a disorder

we all know this is story--and when people go to jail for raping someone even though it was found innocent--in reality that person usually gets raped themselves--then he is found innocent and his own family still wants nothing to do with it--more drama so he may have grown to an adult and achieved any things--he never grew --it is shown in real life drama--a person stops growing from where their physe was destroyed--even though a great story was written that part of it was just talked about his distrust of women--its usually Mom nurtures the son and its Daddys litltle girl. The grandparents did the best for him, he stopped growing and hes highly responsible with no maturity. Being a vet I know lots about PTSD and even though its just a story u can see the fruition of things. Keep up the great writing

This has been fun for the most of it but it’s tiresome that he keeps making the same mistakes most people learn from their mistakes and change their behavior.

This story is becoming tiresome because this dude doesn’t learn from his mistakes and every chapter is basically a repeat of the last chapter.

Sorry I can’t even read another word. This story just sucks. The women are all evil pushy bitches that deserve nothing short of the beatings they deal out. The main guy is the dumbest person on the planet. I hate all of them and hope they die in a cattle stampede. Seriously this just got worse the more I read.

The beginning of Beth's story.

It's been three years. How Beth fucked Steve. One year after graduation. She's six months pregnant and married. Lives in another city. Why would her husband get jealous of Steve? Fucking him after a couple of weeks as she swore her eternal love to Steve, to spite Steve? She was with him for three years and knew he was a jerk, put up with him for two years and then married him?

That doesn't make any sense.

Man is a herd animal. Every herd or flock has a leader. The alpha male. The master of the harem. That's normal. That's nature. Society imposes some restrictions. But restrictions vary from society to society. Even polygamy is allowed in many countries. Religious traditions are just a confirmation. Steve should just change his religion ;).

In some African tribes it is even now practiced, as an element of initiation into adulthood, for girls to have sex with their father or an adult relative and for a boy to have sex with his mother or aunt.

Yep, y'all...this IS a messed-up story line...I LOVE IT...

Steve has to confront his demons, as do his harem women...everybody is eventually going to win here...

The negative 'anonymous' comments, TAKE IT SOMEWHERE ELSE, OR STOP READING/COMMENTING!! WE DO NOT WANT OR NEED YOUR 'NEGATIVE VIBES'!!

**5** STARS...for effort, if nothing else!

What kind of an asshole writes a story and then, using a different account, spitefully trolls his readers. Grow the fuck up ! If you can’t handle comments then delete your goddamn stories! They are written very poorly, and you deserve every bit of criticism that you receive. Quit being a fucking jerk.

To the Debbie downers if you don't like the way it is written go write your own story's 5stars

This guy us the luckiest pushover on the planet.

Steve obviously has issues as do all the girls but give the criticism a break. If you don't like it, just quit reading. The sex is not all that interesting but the underlying story is.