All Comments on 'Found Together'

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RTR10RTR105 months ago

Can't wait to read more!

Frankie1952Frankie19525 months ago

More please. Great start to what could be a very loving and sexy tale. Well done for your first.

Monagamous_NowMonagamous_Now5 months ago

Very well done - more, please!

6toes6toes5 months ago

Enjoyed the story hope there is more to come.

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

You made Ken WAY too short and Kat & Katie WAY too tall. I could maybe see Ken as 5'4 and the girls at 6' each or around that. Tall women are actually rare. especially 6'9 women. And so some reason, I felt like you were going to get the mother involved as well. Personally, if I were the author, I'd do a rewrite and change up the heights to make them more realistic. Otherwise, not really worth the time to read. 2*

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Worth the read, excellent for a first time Author. Thank You for the time and effort put into this out there for everyone to enjoy.

Looking out for the next installment

the6ulprsnthe6ulprsn5 months ago

Great start. Left yourself plenty of room to develop the characters. I like it. (Not like my opinion counts). :)

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

It was a really good story and would love for it to continue. There is lots of ways this could develop with the mother joining the group because like the rest she is lonely too. please hurry with the next segement.

Mikek69Mikek695 months ago

Great story and well written. Can't wait for the next part (there is going to be a follow isn't there?)

Sex_CrazedSex_Crazed5 months ago

I'm only half way through and I can say I would love a part 2

Sex_CrazedSex_Crazed5 months ago

Please hurry with the next part.

postoak2020postoak20204 months ago

Love the story but, the ladies would be more believable with C and D cup boobs

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

A few things ruined this story for me, and it started with the whole dimensions thing (unrealistic boob sizes, 9 inches on a 5 ft frame). Then there are the girls names. You are aware that Katie is short for Katherine, right? Both sisters with the same name, it's just a little too unimaginative. I half expected the mother to be called Kathy. Also, at one point Ken became Kevin. Lastly, one kiss and all of a sudden they're in a relationship and talking about marriage and kids? All of that just made it fall flat

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Cute

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