All Comments on 'Founders Ch. 12'

Enjoying your story but the chapters are getting much to short to really enjoy.

Originally I had a big long disjointed chapter here where too many things were happening. The early chapters each covered a whole day, but as Zach’s days are getting more and more complicated, this began to get unfeasible. Future chapters will take this thematic approach rather than covering an entire day. This means that some chapters will be quite long where others will be shorter than you’ve yet seen.

I guess this means you are eager for more, which is great to hear! There’s always a trade off between getting shorter chapters out quicker or holding back a giant chapter. The theme-based approach is working better for me and is hopefully not too burdensome for the reader.