by KeithD
Your story is both engaging and entertaining. There are a few minor editing slip-ups, but not so many as to discourage me from staying with it. You've crafted a well-paced and imaginative piece of fiction. Congratulations on a job well done and I look forward to future installments. Five stars.
I love my friends very much. Having sex with them is very erotic.
Great writing very well put together did not see that end coming. Thank you.