All Comments on 'Four Meet In Hotel'

by redpan

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
If only...

Interesting, sexy and amusing, but I wish there was more of a buildup before the "fun" begins.

don87654don87654over 18 years ago
Very erotic and natural

Need more, with pictures again that are more definitive.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Excellent start. Eager to see next episode.

As I'm a divorced male, living on my own, I too, could be classed as a voyeur. Unfortunately, my voyeurism is through my computer, and not 'live' as in the story.

Bil PotterBil Potterabout 20 years ago
Great

What a great start to a story - write fast please.

Bil

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