All Comments on 'Four Moms Having Fun'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Good pretext, way too rushed. No build up; everything happened in five minutes.

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roastknoxroastknoxabout 1 year agoAuthor

it did abruptly end while they were all having sex to suggest a chapter 2. the lack of buildup is possibly because of rushed as my my style is quick stories

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