All Comments on 'Four People Three Firsts'

by Jae_one_01

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
hmmmm

I liked it a lot, and it almost got me off.. . but I wish there had been more, you listed in the description the cousin's would be insest, but it never happens in your story. You should make a second chapter :D.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Excellent

A good story, beautifully told.

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