by ReefBeach
Can you please bring back Danny's "voice"? I enjoyed how you incorporated that into the first story - made it more than an enjoyable sex romp - added some depth to the story by making Danny more than a stud muffin. By now, I thought he would have had a theological discussion with Andrea - not saying we necessarily need one, but their personalities add "spice" to the story. Well done!
I have been a bit slack with the interior voices. I like the theology idea, too: I'll take that! Thanks for the feedback.