All Comments on 'Fourth Vector Ch. 22'

by CJMcCormick

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abiostudent3abiostudent3over 3 years ago

Hell yes. Amazing chapter; this one is of noticeably peak quality.

Also, thank you very much for not killing Greg. After the line about never getting to finish the sentence, I was going to be so pissed at you for doing something so trite as having them go through the plague and find each other before having it alllllll ripped away by a stray bullet.

RedRhythmicSerpentRedRhythmicSerpentover 3 years ago
Outstanding!

Many thanks for sharing your talent and this fine story. Happy Thanksgiving to you and yours.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Wow! That ending gave me chills!

Love this story and can't wait for more!

Thank you!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Schemes & politics

The wind under his wings just turned on him.

An Evil Fleet Admiral who will manipulate his demise at the drop of a hat and frame him as a traitor. Can't even turn to an equally evil emperor. Oh my

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Long time, no talk! I'm still around and still writing. I had someone reach out to see if I was still alive, and I very much am. I no longer write under the CJ McCormick pen name though, and I have migrated to using three new pens. I won't be posting to Literotica any lo...

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