All Comments on 'Fragile'

Thanks to my friend and fellow Lit user DickandDoof for his invaluable feedback on the male perspective and his helpful general suggestions for improving the text 🙏🙏🙏. I’ll move this acknowledgment to the actual story body in an edit at some point. Em

This can continue for more, right? Good so far, I liked it.

Fantastic story! I was completely captivated and couldn't wait to see how it turned out.

You humanized the charters and made me feel a connection to them. A+ in my book!

@Will527 - it’s meant to be stand alone. Try You Spin Me Round for more gang bang adventures. Em

@ctarrantella - thank you so much. Em

Beautifully done. I'll probably have more to say on this later, but I loved the, well, HUMANITY of it.

@Djmac1031 - thank you. It’s my least viewed story by some way, but I’m very fond of it. Glad you liked it too 😊. Em

Yes, just like this one, Em. This fits perfectly within my notion of "socially responsible" erotica: intimacy, humanity, humility, yet with a lovely undercurrent of joy.

@electricblue66 - oh thank you. Not exactly a stroke story is it? But I like it a lot. Em

excellent, showing a depth of understanding that surpasses most everything else on Literotica

@Anon - that is very kind of you. This hasn’t been the most popular of works, so it’s nice that some people get what I was trying to do. Em

Not necessarily my cup of Tea but very well written.

@TheArtfulCodger - thank you for trying my stuff. I’m attempting to read more in other genres. Em

That was very good writing, excellent. I am here at the suggestion of notalenthack, and it was a good one.

Fantastic work

@pattilie - thank you. NTH is very kind. Em

@Anon - very happy you liked it 😊. Em

Very well written. Gangbangs aren't really my cup if tea (hell, I skip most erotica part of literotica stories even for stuff that fits my kinks, so sue me :) , so for me this was more of a psychology story.

The main takeaway: the Dave guy made a mistake. Maybe bringing the main character to the gangbang was a good idea or maybe not. BUT... this was clearly the wrong TIME (or at least circumstance in MC's life) to do so. He lucked out in that the young lady seemed to be a good person AND a good practical psychologist. But that was an unlikely outcome. Most likely he'd end up far more traumatized.

But the author managed to create two likeable characters and a positive ending, out of what could have been a sleazy situation. Good job.

NoTalentHack sent me here, and I’m glad he did. Very nice writing. Thank you for this!

@Anon - I’m very grateful for NTH’s kind support. Glad you liked the story 😊. Em

@inka2222 - glad that you enjoyed the writing. Thank you 🙏 . Em

Referred to this story by NoTalentHack (whose name I think does NOT really describe him !), I have to agree that this tale was very good - 5 stars good !

Although 'Fetish' isn't my usual haunt on Lit, I think I do need to read more of your work as he suggested, and as I think, based on how well this tale was told.

@EastCoaster1 - thanks, hun. I’m an East Coaster too. I appreciate your feedback - and NTH’s support. Em

A well-written story about 2 interesting people

Also here on NoTalentHack's recommendation

You get 5

@Anon - glad to have you as a reader (thanks to NTH). 😊. Em

Wow!

Just wow.

Depth, you write it

@Lc69hunter - thanks, hun. I write a lot of superficial stuff, not so much this one. Em

Wanted to see how ‘emesis’ was used in an erotic story. We’ll done.

Now try ‘fecal impaction’.

@Trionyx - that might be a reach even for me, hun 🤣. Em

Sorry: Well done. Damn autocorrect.

Thanks to NoTalentHack, I have located your writings. This is my first read. Very well done! Looking forward to reading your ither works as your New Fan!

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@Anon - glad to have you. NTH is much too kind. Em

"The overall scenario is based on my own experiences"

Em... You are a naughty girl... A sexy and Naughty girl. Nice story.

@32aa “ Em... You are a naughty girl” - like that’s the first time I’ve heard that! Em

A beautifully written story. The timing of the plot twist was perfect & the interaction between the two characters was tender & believable. The gangbang must have been amazing!

@LiquidLunch - thank you so much 😊. Em

Enjoyed the story immensely. Sensuous and sensitive. You captured the male perspective convincingly, but who knows what they really think? From my side of the aisle anyway. Thanks for a very pleasant read.

@Mastered_again - so glad you liked it 😊 Em

The story was presented in a most eloquent manner, beautiful writing. The story though I think tries to make light of "or normalize" sex with multiple people, I say people and not partners because partners refers to a commitment and most often only two members, as firms will have multiple partners but still the commitment to the partnership is based on the expectation for long term investment. It sounded like the MC should have been out with a "girlfriend experience" escort rather than being at a gangbang to fk some slut, and though the relief from the release is the goal it is the best way to manipulate males, and the MC seamed to be of a bit higher class, then to be engaging in low class debauchery, and he deserved better as do many who are dragged into the mud.

@Anon - people have different views of morality, hun. Different views of comfort and healing. Thank you for taking the time to post a detailed comment. Em

I promised you to read the story and provide comments from the perspective of a husband who lost his wife 15 months ago to cancer. "I don't need saving, I don't need protecting, I don't need therapy. I just need to be fucked. Understood?" was a quote that was relevant. When I considered a sex worker, all I could think of was how to save, protect and help her get another profession. His initial reaction of feeling like she was fragile and like my daughter was very relevant to my feelings. This occurred during the first 6 months since my wife’s passing. I later learned that I was experiencing what psychologists call “widows fire”. It does affect men too. It’s a case of heightened libido. The state of high libido has passed with time. I now am focusing on a longer term and loving relationship with a lady friend.

Enough about me. The link to widows and widowers I sent in a thread is a good place to get more perspective from widows and widowers. Many feel horny but really they miss as I do the close physical and emotional intimacy of the one they loved and lost.

@B2fromA2looking4U - thank you for reading and for the detailed feedback 😊 Em

I've come to this set of stories from the end so have had to start here again, you write so well, much better than I ever could or do. I had just clicked a title so hadn't seen who wrote it and was thinking halfway through the last one that maybe you were a female, by your name I was right, but I don't believe anything on the internet so maybe not and you really can write…. 😀😀

This is a good take on how some women treat sex, much like a man, but I don't think there are many like that, shame, but that's life…

I do know a woman who loves sex, so much so it's her job, I won't use that name, she's lucky, she's found a man who loves her, and lets her go to work. I couldn't that, I'm too selfish, but you write that it could happen, it does, so we'll done you.

Thanks for writing. I wish I had the memory to comeback and see if you have replied, but it will probably be in a few years, I can't be bothered to go read my feedback.😄

@oldtwit - thank you for the kind words 😊. I’m very fond of Fragile, my first attempt at any level of seriousness in a story. Em

I know I am going to come to like Emily a lot.

@Anon - that’s kind of you to say. Thank you 😊. Em

This is the second story I have read of yours, first time commenting.

I personally like my stories with a little more meat on the bones. Thank you for writing this.

*on to read the others...*

@lavendersilk - thank you 🙏. Fragile was my first attempt at writing an at least a semi-serious story and at covering subjects other than just sex. I’m quite proud of it for those reasons; and the start of a journey for me. Em

I liked both main characters. You drew them perfectly. And while I do not agree with the philosophy it was well presented. I am very happy to vote five stars

@Cracker270 - thank you 😊 Em

I also share that view that when we are done here, we are done. I was in a similar situation until I lost her to the big C a few years ago, so no I don't see her sitting up there in judgement. The loss is one thing followed by the desire to have what we had before, again. Obviously not for me anymore. But your stories are good this one the big hearted lover probably a bit unrealistic, but the thought, a bit of fun.

@Devilboy - this one is am invented story, but with the backdrop of my college sex group. It’s meant to be about bereavement, moving on, the healing power of sex, and the occasional inaccuracy of stereotypes. Emily