All Comments on 'Frankenstein's Castle'

and you write sex scenes very well! Good luck in the contest!

nice job.

slant on an old story. It takes guts to try something like that. I think the idea is good, and you keep it interesting right until the end.

Good luck in the contest.

Black Tulip

A few spelling errors and you changed POV's a few times but the idea was sound. As someone before commented you write sex scenes really well. Good luck!

Cookie :)

...idea for the story, and some good descriptive sex. However, it was very choppy, the POV got confusing, and it definitely could've used a good editing.

not very well written.