All Comments on 'Frat's Bitch Ch. 02'

by Lgreenwood44

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63lsmith63lsmithalmost 8 years ago
GETTING BETER

This was better than the first chapter. Keep it coming.

tristantrotskytristantrotskyalmost 8 years ago
Spunk-Eater

All Gay Boys love the taste of cum, it's only natural...

zolyzolyover 7 years ago
awesome plot

Hope youll continue! way better than the first. I love ass licking and face sitting more than anything, next to deep throating actually. hope youll go more cruel, would had been epic if one of them didn't wipre properly after taking a dump. and the poor nerd becomes known to be a faggot, where he actually is straight, and the two guys tell all around he is a cocksucker and gay.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
longer, harder

Like your work, but they are tooooooo short. You can't build believable characters and sex acts in a few hundred words. Develop the characters motivations, weaknesses, thoughts, etc. Your style and execution are great, just make your stories longer. And Harder.

getarisegetariseover 6 years ago
So Hot

Such a hot story for one page. Perhaps, it’s just one of my biggest fantasies. Thanks! Write more!

zolyzolyabout 6 years ago
fantastic

I hope you come back one day to write more. I love forced college plot like this more than anything! especially if all are straight.

rafa614rafa614over 5 years ago
Come back!

This was so hot and was getting really intersting. Hope you continue the story.

Dratini2011Dratini2011over 3 years ago

Where is the the next chapter

mic1980devmic1980dev4 months ago

fucking hot. please more. more frats should do, trick more guys, tie them in driveable stocks in basement, let them become frat bitches, ben is the perfekt blackmailer, more please, and chasity and shrink their cocks

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