All Comments on 'Freckles, Twenty Years Later'

Always look forward to your posts! Never disappointed! Maybe not a 10 but sure a solid 5*

Merry Christmas, Tex. May the New Year find you healthy, frisky and creative!

I really liked this story and would love to read more about these three

Sure wish there was more to it though! I realize that their fantasies have turned to reality in this one, but I think one more chapter of their 'marital bliss' and pregnancies would be great! Please keep writing, I'll keep reading!! I loved it.

how about another chapter? then another with the next generation?

Wow, between chapters one and two you covered so many fantasies! I’ m wagering not only mine were covered, likely quite a few readers had to stop and either think or say:That’s MY fantasy! How did he know about that?! “

My sister had a couple girlfriends that I STILL kick myself over never seriously trying to get in their pants. Partly, never being alone without a parent lurking about, a VERYVERY cruel and heavy handed father, and me being shy and unsure as a result.

Ooops, sorry! This is a review, not self analysis!

Anyway, like others have said, another couple chapters would be wonderful. Nt so sure about the kids, though. I mean, the children have to be in a positive and conducive nurturing environment.

Going to school and telling kids and teachers “My mommy’s brother lives with us.”. He is also my daddy, and when he doesn’t sleep with mommy, he sleeps with Aunt Jenny.” Ohhhh yeah! social Services and a squad car would bring that little girl home from school!!

a love story

This is a Wonderful Hot Erotic story that added to the previous chapter. This one got us to where the first one should included Janet and Max together. Adding Jenny to this was perfect. This dual marriage isn’t a bad idea in this case as Max loves both Janet and Jenny and they love and lust over him. Since the girls are Bi it should work to allow Max time to recharge and reload to satisfy both wives. Thank You!

The time skip ruined it imo.

More please, lets get to the weddings and filling the nursery up.

Would love to read a part 3

20 years seems to be a pattern. That's a long time to hold on to an orgasm. A good tale and a pleasant finale. This one works on all cylinders and mix and matches all my buttons. Again a follow up would be appreciated. Thanks!

TxRad writes well but never has it in him to follow up or complete his works.