All Comments on 'Free Birds Ch. 07'

Hey, it's me, Lisa. This story was about 3/4 written several years ago, and I just never finished it and sent it in. So, I completed and polished it, and I guess I can finally get around to finishing this series.

Free Birds has been fun, because there's no really deep message, no really dark elements, it's just girls wanting to have fun...and they DO!

After we learn about Emily, Kira and Rachel's histories and motivations, they're going to have a bang-up time in San Diego, I just know it!!

Looking forward to the road trip! It's been an exciting flight so far.

This series is amazing. I can't wait to read what happens next.

Went looking for the chapters talking about the road trip. Can't find them. Have you written those pages yet?

It looks like Rachel and Kira will break up. But what will happen to them? It also looks like Emily wants to be Kira's lover. Interesting!

But it has been well over a decade and I don't see the story about the "road trip," much less anything else. Is there ever going to be a follow-up? I see that you, Lisa, are active again and I am glad. What do you think you want to do?

Very well written. Just loved these series but bitterly disappointed that you Lisa have quite obviously decided that the sequel you alluded to in the last sentences (how long ago was it??), will never be written as you either can't be bothered or you simply can't for some other reason that only you know what.

I am so sorry to have disappointed some of my devoted readers, but life got in the way...and it hasn't gotten out of the way. I don't think we'll ever find out what these beautiful girls were up to in my head, but why not use YOUR imagination and write a story wrapping this up, and post it on Literotica? It only seems fair, I write 100+ stories, and the dissatisfied reader writes 1. Okay?