All Comments on 'Free My Inner Slut'

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CreativeProfCreativeProfabout 5 years ago
Write me at gavican2003@att.net. Prof. Yav

Congratulations! You are a talented writer, with even greater potential. Prof. Gav

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Great first story

I really liked the story. You could feel the no nonsense nature of the dominant man and the submissive nervousness of your sub. I’d love to read more about what that plug felt like or what was going through her mind I. The intro to humiliating into to exposed anal play. My first was intense, uncomfortable and embarrassing as the widest spot passed through my ring. It’s removal and reinsertion was mixed with the application removal and reapplication of nipple clamps. My nipple pain worsened as my ass got used to it. Thank you for that trip down memory lane

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
good work! nice touches!

Good writing with a lot of nice touches that make it distinctive. The “I’m not your ex-husband” was a great line that said a lot about what might have been in both of their heads. His obvious enjoyment and affection for her even with his no-nonsense dominance was also nice. Hope you will continue!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
More

I liked the story but I want to read more about what he has in store for sharing her with his friends and to see what they think when he shows them the pictures of her pussy and her dick sucking skills.

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I write fiction, published and paid, with erotic content aimed toward women. I love writing sex and relationship stories, happy for now ending. Not always vanilla. Okay, never vanilla.