All Comments on 'Free Use for Ghosts'

Loved the subject. It has enormous potential. I always fantasized with the movie The Entity with the same subject. Would love to read more stories of this girl. Only con Too Short

Sorry, I don't get it, there's no lead in painting what or were this story is all about (a plot), no character development and no reason this woman would be picked out for this to happen.

Too fragmented, despite the originality of the concept. Please try to expand this into a full story.

I plan to take the suggestions into account and rewrite this just as a heads up so follow me if you want to get notified when I get around to doing so lol 😁

Creative! Prose needs work, too 'and this happened and that' without letting us feel what's happening with her. That's just developed skill though, something that practie can create. I hope you do, because this is one of the most original concepts I've read in a while.

It has been rewritten!