All Comments on 'Free Vacation'

i loved it probally because i enjoy sharing my wife and watching her with others..... thanks and keep up the good work ,,,,,comncplnfl@yahoo.com

It's kinda erotic but I'll NEVER understand a man who thinks so little of his wife that he wants others to fuck her.

Faith, fidelity gone replaced with adultery. Marriage vows, usually made with God in church, thrown out.

Erotic but very sad.

It's kinda erotic but I'll NEVER understand a man who thinks so little of his wife that he wants others to fuck her.

Faith, fidelity gone replaced with adultery. Marriage vows, usually made with God in church, thrown out.

Erotic but very sad.

I'll NEVER understand why people who disaprove of this type of story read it and take the time to comment. Once you've figured out what it's about, why not move on and read something else?

IF it turned you on and you are uncomfortable with your own reaction then be honest and say so. Don't get all high and mighty about other people writing stuff that turns you on.

The writing was good. I enjoy a bit more discussion between the husband and wife about how they feel leading up to the event. It may just be your style, but I think it adds to the tension. Keep writing.

This story is somewhat sexy,but you need desparately to pay attention to verb tense. If you are speaking in the present,then keep the tense in the present...in the past, then in the past. Poor spelling (What is "finically?")is distracting. Additionally, first person narration works, as long as you remember to put internal dialogue in quotations. The phrase "Ok girl, hold it together." is an example of this. Note the added quotation marks and the comma. Your future stories will be much more readable with objective proofreading prior to submission.

Thank you for the very erotic story. I feel sorry for the sap who complained about the lack of "faith and fidelity". Where does he find erotic stories based on these concepts? Obviously I enjoy wife sharing stories and thats why I read them. Yours are excellent.

Liked the story...and its one of my many unexplored fantasies...maybe someday..

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what wife does for her husband as a description?? sounds like what wife does for herself. I had maybe been expecting a three some but to find the husband dominated by the wife's lover (get us some water) and disreapected by them both (I didn't feel embarresed to be naked with my lovers cock inside me) was just wrong. Had to stop reading half way through just skimmed the rest. the description of the story was very misleading

"Mike calls for Steve, tells him to bring us two glasses of water." That makes Steve a servant and should not be. And, Steve seeing them coupled together made if far less erotic. Better she should have returned to Steve later or early the next morning.

I enjoyed your story. But it needs a bit more detail and explain the how ands why of what is going on better.

With what? Letting her husband see for himself that she's a cheating slut? That she doesn't care about who might make her pregnant? That she doesn't care about std's, aids or herpes? That she has no love or respect for her husband or herself? That she doesn't care about her marriage vows? or that she wants a divorce? Boy was this a stupid story.

"Get us a drink of water, cuck." says Jen, the whore. " Coming. " says Steve, the cuck. "Hurry!" Says Mark, the bull( shit). Welcome to your new life boy.