All Comments on 'Freedom and Consequences Ch. 01'

I cant wait for the next part . Very Nicely Written!

Keep up the good work!!!

no incest or taboo here

Normally, I see readers complaining because the story isn't incest. The category includes taboo as well. This story has neither...Are you planning to have him take a stab at sis when he gets home?

I feel like your setting the characters and the scene with the first chapter. I will continue to read and see what develops. There are good possibilities here. Thanks for your time and imagination.

OK, I like a good read but sometimes I run across something that is just wrong. In this case it's the hero's "heroic" dick. 7-3/4" long is ok and believable, but his purported 3" diameter is neither heroic nor even possible. Three inches is a half inch bigger than a Coke can. I can, perhaps, allow that the author actually meant 3 inches in circumference because that would be well within the realm of believability. It is obvious that the author has not measured his own cock nor been very observant when watching porn. To all current and prospective authors out there, part of proofreading is also a reality check. I know it's fiction and fantasy, but sometimes it is just too fantastic.

This is a good start i cant wait to see it progress. Im hoping for a nice, loving relationship between sibs here. 5 stars