All Comments on 'Freedom Pt. 11: Catriona'

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Anonymousabout 6 years ago

Nice conclusion

:-) That touched.

Thinking about teaching luck, and about other things.

kuhpa01 about 6 years ago

More than a small loose end

I really hate to think that after all the effort you put into developing the character of Hilde, that you would simply leave her alone and naked on a damn frozen beach while the others happily teleport to Catriona.

That is not nice.

FranziskaSissy over 1 year ago

Freedom ....... Perfect ending ....... Masterly handcrafted

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All my stories exist in the same fantasy world. You can find the map of said world here: https://i.imgur.com/njRJtmY.jpg I'm currently working on 'Echoes of Spring' and 'A Dream of Empire'. The prologue to 'A Dream of Empire' begins with "Luck Pt.01 - A Chance Meeting". It...

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