All Comments on 'French Kissing for Girls'

You should continue the story of this two girls, and maybe tell the story of Mom and Dad too, since this story was awsome!

Good story. Yes, you can expand on it quite a bit, I think. Somehow I see Kirsty with Tom, for instance.

And Jeannie will be near, I think??

Wow, this story has all the ability to be one of the best erotic stories of all time. Excellent, excellent, excellent. Definitely write more... lots more

it was outstanding, u should defently add on to this to when they eventualy get boyfriends and the mom and dads night

Really hot story Alex. Good luck in the contest!

You write very nicely. Your story was realistic and believable... You chose good words for discription, and you give the right amount of detail. A great part about this story was you didn't jump into the sex too quickly.. this gives the reader time to care about who is doing what to whom. Enjoyed it very much and my prick did too! ;)

continue this story you have opened up many possibilities.

Well written, plausible, and erotically entertaining. Great Job.

Bonnybee

Loved it Alex. Off to read part 2 now!

Loved the story! I'll be reading part two later tonight!

Good tale, enjoyable and 'juicy'.

That was rediculously well written. I just visit here on occassion because I'm a dirty little punk, but that was not only exciting, but masterfully written, very well done!

on to part 2!

This was the cheesiest story ever! Who actually calls somebody "my lover?"

Well, it's a very common expression in England; from where the writer comes.

You know...England. It's a country. One of those places outside of the USA.

Yes...that's right...there is a world outside of America.

But I don't think the expression is exactly 'rare' here either, to be fair.

the title explains it all... loved it

A lovely, credible, well-paced, truly erotic story with very believable and likeable characters and motives. There are a couple of us in Literotica who like to write this style, though we're hard to find amongst the "40 DD" set. I'll be reading more of your work soon.

Wonderful writing took me right along into the intense feelings of the lovers!

Your style is very smooth, no confusion, no dropped stitches, as it were.

Excellent, provocative and well thought out and very horny!

Golly, when I was growing up, I don't think there were any nude beaches or "national nude day" so we had to make do with what we had. In NC we had lots of small lakes and ponds and they were great for midnight nude swims, but not for ogling the opposite sex in the open. We also had Atlantic Ocean beaches and there was a lot going on in the water and on porches of temporarily vacant beach houses and on the beaches at night (in those days we could sleep on the beach, have fires, picnics, and more!) But never wholesale nudity. I can only imagine what a rush that would be even though people say that after a little while, it becomes truly natural. I love the female body, and I'm sure I'd enjoy every minute of it. Speaking of enjoyment, I really liked this story - teens exploring a new sexuality is always exciting and offers many ways for the story to go. Hopefully, we'll be treated to some of those by this author who seemingly can make any situation interesting and sexy. Since I think we'll be treated to some adults awakening in the next episode, I'll move on now. Thanks for a really good tale.

Nice story, very easy and slow going

I think i'm getting wet though ;)

Still, maybe not so much of the 'no more lover', it just sounded a little weird when you continually have the word lover in there

Just my thoughts! :) Great work! keep going!