All Comments on 'French Letters'

Wow! What a story. The contrast between the true intimacy of the letter-writers and the physicality of the sexual relationships they described is wonderful. Please give me more!

All the French was lost on me.

I studied Latin...:+))) And Norwegian...:+))))

The importance of their Intimacy Island bonding eluded me

in that story...as to their mutual commitment.

This is nicely done....but needs to continue.

Since your purpose is a continuum (I think) ?

You have a lot of blending to do yet.

I wonder if your gift for dialog isn't better suited for film?

Now that I've read most of your stories that interest me...

The added context(s) clarifies much more for me.

It's a fun read. More than I realized.

Following up on my suggestions and recommendations

about you trying dramatic structure writing...

Violet is the "star" of this story. She has a character "want"

and takes actions to get it. She's the one about whom we wonder...

What will she do next? What does she want? Ogsa videre (Norsk…:+) Hah!

AND...There's an 8:55 Hug. The World is set right again.

Kisses,

King Cuddle