by Conversations
Now that I've read most of your stories that interest me...
The added context(s) clarifies much more for me.
It's a fun read. More than I realized.
Following up on my suggestions and recommendations
about you trying dramatic structure writing...
Violet is the "star" of this story. She has a character "want"
and takes actions to get it. She's the one about whom we wonder...
What will she do next? What does she want? Ogsa videre (Norsk…:+) Hah!
AND...There's an 8:55 Hug. The World is set right again.
Kisses,
King Cuddle
All the French was lost on me.
I studied Latin...:+))) And Norwegian...:+))))
The importance of their Intimacy Island bonding eluded me
in that story...as to their mutual commitment.
This is nicely done....but needs to continue.
Since your purpose is a continuum (I think) ?
You have a lot of blending to do yet.
I wonder if your gift for dialog isn't better suited for film?
Wow! What a story. The contrast between the true intimacy of the letter-writers and the physicality of the sexual relationships they described is wonderful. Please give me more!