All Comments on 'Frenching David's Mom'

this was a waste of time.

Not nit-picking. Just being honest. This isn't as good a story as your other one. It is fun, and David is entertaining with his masturbation and request for a blowjob. There's no sex and no incest. I like you, but this could be better. It is well written and the reader gets to invent his/ her own version of a French dialect, but feels unfinished

not erotic but there ae enough of those..... thanks

the last few paragraphs. What a crock of shit.