All Comments on 'Friday Foibles and Easter Edibles'

by Bethyboo

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
go back

The author should go back to grade school ASAP and learn proper English. The use of "..." in place of a coma (,) so frequant and often ruins the story so fast.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Hahahah the Anonymous English Teacher misspells ... HAAAAHAHAhahahah ..

Gotta love it: an Anonymous bonehead comes in here and with full-on condescension, tells the author to go back to grade school, then completely buggers the English language in the space of one demented "sentence," to wit:

** "The use of '...' in place of a coma (,) so frequant and often ruins the story so fast. ..." **

That mysterious "..." is called an ellipsis. Look it up. I know it confuses you, but it's a perfectly legitimate structure for most of us.

And it's a "comma", NOT a "coma." A "comma" is an element of punctuation; a "coma" is a state of deep and often prolonged unconsciousness, not unlike your life, it seems.

Finally, that word you're looking for in your illiterate haze is "frequent" - NOT "frequant" ...

Now, who exactly is it that needs to go back and get educated?

Haaaaahahahahah ....

This story's not my cup of tea, but its author has more literacy in her nipple that you've got in your entire, echoing, empty skull.

Have a nice day, twat.

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