All Comments on 'Fridays at the Guardian Angel Ch. 04'

by WhiskeyRose

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

keep them coming!! these stories are amazing!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
really well done story but

I really despise people like Jackie. People that know they are users and abusers but refuse to change for whatever reason. I would almost prefer it that she had no qualms about what she does rather than have them and still be a asshole. I also wonder what your purpose of this chapter was cause I very much doubt it was to arouse, I'm left more just angry and depressed.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

I agree with the first comment. Jackie is a total cunt.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

That was a really great chapter. Love this world you have created, and you did an exceptional job turning Sherry from sex object who we were rooting for Jackie to have her sadistic fun with to a sympathetic fleshed out endearing person while also doing the same with Jackie in the end.

That ending was really heart warming.

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