All Comments on 'Friend Borrows My Wife Pt. 02'

You need to learn to write properly in English.

Sorry, I don't speak Russian. This story is un-readable.You need to have it translated into the Queen's English!

Listen to the people who tell you that you need help. I read the entire thing just to try to understand it. It might have been fine when you wrote it, but it just doesn’t translate to English. Two men fighting just don’t grab each other by the breasts and fall to the floor. I’m assuming that the stories were posted to close together for you to fix. The only thing I could figure was that a Andrei got his balls back and kicked Dimka’s commie ass.

This is... I can’t even...

Sadly so difficult to read

I just hope everyone is either dead or single when the story is over

Judging by the comments, Zadornov correctly said: what English-speaking stupid!!!))) And one idiot even said something about "communism"!)))

great story all the better for who or what did the translation. Interesting working out the story line

I guess he knows that his wife took his friends dick up her ass . She was fucking him for days . Total betrayal and he could’ve said the sister told him they were fucking and that’s why he fucked the sister

What I want to know is, what happened to the bullet vibrator that the husband found the empty box for, and how was it used? I would also have been nice to know what kind of sex advice Olga gave toViak?

I also wonder where bullet vibrator has gone and also where they went in aqua park with Victoria :) maybe someone will finish the story :)

Excellent story

Very hot, even translated. So, well done. Write more

There are moments where the Russian translation falls short, but it is interesting despite this — the slightly different attitude towards sex, calling your sick a “fighter”, mixups in pronouns definitely needs a human touch. The hangover descriptions are as interesting as I would expect from a Russian text. The hero is a real person — not perfect, he falls, but is not a hypocrite, and forgives his wife, who is a feisty, passionate woman. Well done, keep writing, just get an editor.

Nearly impossible to read.

Story line has some potential.

Even in Russian cuck shit is cuck shit

Translation?

The translation did NOT do your story justice!

Don't be discouraged by this and please write another, or at least make this story readable.

Thank you.

Couldn't finish it.

Yea I stopped. The English was so bad I could figure out what was happening. Very confusing. I have no idea who is who, who is with who, and who had sex with who other than the MC? Had sex with Olga.

Even if husband he will never betray his wife ge has control over himself ,wife's are sex freaks they never have control over themselves they are sluts their excuses were drunk it just happened all sorts of crap