All Comments on 'Friend Borrows My Wife'

talk and talk nothing said.cockold story from the beginning.

a bunch of degenerated russians animals porking?!

very confusing and poorly written

I have better friends than that. Not to mention a better wife.

Really tired of these sick stories, by fucked up writers who get off on this crap! Put it in Fetish where it belongs.

26thNC Approved

So poorly translated, it's unreadable.

Part 2 is not necessary. I wouldn't waste the time.

Thanks for warning not to read this 26thCucknut. My usual 1* for Cucknut approved shit.

Not too sure just how to rate this one. You have a pretty good story, but the telling is long winded. Is that because it was written in Russian? Just not sure. You said it was translated from the Russian—as it turns out you’d be much better served having an English speaker interrupt what you are trying to say vs giving the English meaning of the Russian word.

Take this segment for example:

- And how strange it is that my fiance is traveling in the car with my friend, and her luggage is in your car ... well, since you've agreed to an adventure, it's time ... to start portraying her. - added Dima.

Wouldn’t something like this play better to an English/American audience?

“…and don’t you think it would look strange for my fiancé to be riding with my friend instead of me? We even have her luggage in your car—my sister might be dumb, but she ain’t stupid.” Looking at Vika, Dima says, “You agreed to do this thing, so let’s start doing it right.”

It’s your first story, and you have the story’s basics down pretty good, so I just thought I’d offer the suggestion. If I was trying to write in Russian, I’d sure welcome any and all help.

Good Luck! cd

Absolutely moronic, stupid, horrid, lazy and ridiculous way to set up just another cuck story.

Any other idiot would just have said we split up but noooooooooooooooooo we had to do this drivel.

I'm thinking this was translated from Russian... badly.

English is my second language so I understand the grammar differences. But I had trouble understanding it and quit.

I did not score it.

If I were you, I would have it edited and resubmitted.

Horrible to read. Agree completely with the other commentors.

i really love the plot and interested to read the part 2 but the english translation is very hard to read and lot of times it didnt make any sense. i had to guees a lot of what was said.

Although somewhat difficult to read I like where it’s going please continue

A good story if you made it clear. Not giving you any ******* for now. Hope the second part is better.

Where did the donkey fit in? I gave up shortly after that. Please get someone to edit and translate it properly for you. You have some hopeful comments where people want to read the follow up but if it's too hard to make out what you are trying to convey, people like me lose interest. I hope you resubmit the story after it has been sorted out.

I’m sure 26Cuck got all the way through this ponderous, badly translated tale. Author get some editing help, and stay away from the friend with wife cuckold story. It is of much lameness for story.

good plot, great fun to read with the dodgy translation.

Did you notice that your story is all about idiots and sluts? If this is your circle of acquaintances and friends, or even if this is family for you, then I know a good therapist. Call me or write to me. I will be happy to give you his address!

I'm reposting another user' public comment.

"Anon 11 months ago

Although somewhat difficult to read I like where it’s going please continue"

will be great if someone will continue

Next time don't even think to write anything else . Ch 1 Pg 2 was so fucked up . Want me to repeat what i read fuck that you do it yourself . I read the same thing over and over and over and over . I'm not that educated but i wouldn't do that . Even a caveman wouldn't make such a mistake

I see divorce in the making!

Unfortunately English not being your first language means that the grammar and in particular sentence structure made this unreadable. No one wants to have to spend twice as more time figuring out what you're trying to say than it takes to actually read.