All Comments on 'Friends & Forever'

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mitchawamitchawaover 5 years ago
Well Done

I have a niece who recently found that she and a good friend of her sparked chemically and sexually, much like your story. The characters are well described both physically and emotionally. The way Sean detected Rayne's mood, and the way he "forced" her to reveal her problem by having him reveal his problem first. A nice twist.

The love scene was hot and I'm disappointed I won't be able to read the second.

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