All Comments on 'Friends and Lovers Ch. 01'

Enjoyable

And seems to be a great background for the story

Looking forward to reading more

Thanks for a great start, I'll be looking forward to more.

Did she vanish? I thought she and Jack would be connected and we'd have a sex scene! No? Jack seems such a mature, well-put-together young man -- a sexy guy who doesn't know he's sexy. Have him peel his shirt off to reveal a magnificent chest coated with hair -- now there's an inviting sight!