All Comments on 'Friends Become More Ch. 03'

This looks promising, keep it up!

Please keep it up. Cant wait to read what's coming up.

Are these two even physically attracted to each other? Its a nice story, but feels very mechanical, to practical with no passion! In the real world two people in love would find it very difficult to not be all over each other!

Good stuff! An anonymous commenter below finds this Author's writing mechanical. Don't disagree if you can't hear the voices telling their stories. I can hear Ben and Alex. I'm rooting for Ben and Alex. Happy there's a Chapter 4