All Comments on 'Friends Helping Friends Ch. 02'

Love this story!

Wonderful Hot Erotic chapter! Bob is a true shithead that can’t see what he has and thinks he’s god’s gift to women. It nice to know that Mandy and Jen both got to enjoy Jack. Thank you and looking forward to reading the next chapter.

Good chapter!

4

what a great series so far!

I think Bob needs to live in a female led marriage for a while. As an apology to her. He has the ability to do the deed, and it's his own mindset that is F'd up. He's busy thinking of the shrink, when he should be eating his wife to a screaming O and then love making to an even bigger one. What an ass. But yes, we want more of this story line.

Great wives and one very stupid husband.

Bob is all kinds of stupid, isn't he?

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It'll be interesting to see where this one goes. As long as it doesn't start involving aliens and mind control, I'm in.

Good story. 5 stars. Jen should have dumped his cheating ass. And taken him for all he has. That she is going home with him say what her love for him is. If there is more to the story (I think that there isn't but what do I know) I do hope she dumps him and joins Jack and Mandy. Maybe they introduce her to Jack's brother and a romance story will emerge.

5 Stars

Excellent dialogue! Great action! Will there be a chapter 3??

I really liked this story. I think it speaks to a lot of marriages that have lasted a long time and the two are "just going through the motions" or "staying together for the kids." At this point I think Jen should leave him, but as long as she's willing to keep him ... <shrug>

I'd like another chapter, to wrap things up and see if Jen keeps Bob or ends up with Jack and Mandy as as live-in lover or finds a new guy who appreciates her.

Wow! Hell of a story, Man! But then you are the "storyman"! Was it over the top in places? Yeah, but this is Literotica and it was fiction. Quite an imagination but I enjoyed the yarn. I sure hope old Bob mouths off to Jen again and she gives him one of those "Nutcracker" moves. What a dush! Well done!

Cheers

SAGE

Good story. Need some attribution tags, though. When four people are active in a conversation, and you just have the dialog without attribution, it's often hard to determine who is speaking.

A well written storey, but personally I didn’t like the disrespect Bob showed for his wife. ⭐️⭐️⭐️