All Comments on 'Friend's Mom Ch. 01'

By titling this "Ch 01" you're promising further chapters; indeed, the implication is the number will reach two digits. This is an enticing first installment. You would benefit from the help of a friend who would proofread and edit (an English major, most likely). But this is promising.

Great start, looking forward to the next installment.

Liked it!

Ah, where is the end?

A good start. I'll reserve judgment after I've read the next installment.

I liked this, simple plot used in quite a few stories, but you put just that little bit into it that made it really good, part 2 ? I hope.

I’m looking forward to Part 2.

Good short story 5 stars

A typical plot, but is well-written, A long led into the sex scene which was well done, but too short. The dialogue was good, and Chris' internal dialogue was right on.