All Comments on 'Friends to Lovers'

this was a hot story...i liked it...beth sounds like one hot babe...is there going to be a second chapter?

Sexiest ive read in a long time. I only wish we could have heard it from Beths veiw too!

Very close to real life, I loved it

there are no words that can come to mind right now other than "more"...please tell me that there's more...i loved it..you got skills

that was amazing! keep writing, you are definitely good at it!

This played well for me as my wife's best friend is named Susan. I have fantasied about the two of them together many times.

oh my pussy is so weat i need some one to eat it for me fuck i am so horny

A damned good erotic tale, dripping with excitement.

BTW Should that have been joules ? (as in energy) ?

This is exactly what I would love to do with my best friend! She is so beautiful and I would love to make love to her and eat her pussy!! Damn, this made me so hot and horny for her and i would so love for her to eat my hot pussy!! Hoping this happens soon between us...can't wait much longer! loved your writing....keep it up!!

So imagined me doing this to my friend.. gorgeous.. i loved it!

I enjoyed how it progressed, very hot, exciting, believable.

Oh fuck me! I need someone to lick my pussy