All Comments on 'Friends to Romantic Benefits'

Any comments/suggestions is appreciated. This is my first story

This is a great story. I normally like FWB stories to stay FWB, but this time I think it would be great to take it farther. Keep up the writing!

This feels like it stopped halfway through something that was meant to be larger. 3 stars for incomplete.

Enjoyable story and relationship development.

Suggest drop the emotion and LOL etc. They are not necessary and interrupt smooth flow of reading; almost had me drop back to 3 stars. That's how annoying they are. Stayed with 5 stars cos was good story and you deserved encouragement.