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All Comments on 'Friend's Wife Kalpana Pt. 01'

by freethe

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Sensational

Can’t wait for part 2! Keep it going

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
An exciting ride in the making

So far the going is very good. The plot, characterization, the flow, the buildup and the writing. The follow up possibilities are quite exciting. Hope freethe will follow it up in the same rhythm.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Waiting for the 2nd part

Eagerly waiting for the next part.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

WTF? How did I just discover your writing? Great scene setting and characterization. I can see the old man with the stripper. Very well done.

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