by spider007
Is this a two way street? Does Dan get to have sex with all of Janices friends? If not she is jut a lieing slut who cuckolded her husband with his best friends. Is she really a Loving Wife? I think not. The minute she lied to him the marriage is over.What would she say if the shoe was on the other foot and he lied about fucking all of her friends? I do not think she would be all that forgiving. Just more cuckold garbage
Go back under the rock you crawl out from under, what is so sexy about a cheating spouse you have to be a retard.
Not erotic even if hubby wants to share her this is just her cheating and there is nothing loving about it. I don't know what kind of persin gets off on this but yuck
Loved how you built it up ... was very HOT ... cannot wait until Chapter 2
offsetting penalties, she grossly cheated with his pals, and lies; throw her out and do damage control. And Dan, women love firemen and he can replace her easily enough
Best thing Dan can do is just loba grenade into the hous and kill all of the dumg asses
Then he needs some enemies, they would treat him better. 1* for a shitty story. I hope that there IS NOT a chapter 2 or no other stories from you at all.
Strongly urge you to write the next chapter and ignore all the bullshit.
Hey dude. . after a long time i enjoyed visualizing the story. . i feel it could have been better but seeing u r new in this. . its a great story and i loved it mate. . write more in the future. . it would be more erotic if the female is more reluctant and takes more time to melt. .
".. ignore the bullshit..."
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That would mean ignoring those who don't like people having their own opinions, which would put you at the top of the ignore list.
yes slut but this stuff happens in the real world .... more than some like to think
Your stories are awful. How about watching some tv or maybe going for a walk. Anything but this.
I am an Asian Singaporean woman and I think this story was well written and totally hot. For the haters, go read Barbara Cartland.
Threesomes and gang bangs happen far more often than most people think. l thoroughly enjoyed part one. The slut and l enjoy the nasty talk too.
A great story, looking forward to reading chapter two.
What kind of idiot is 26thNC below? The entire category is about wives having sex with others. If they were just friends it would not be on this site. Maybe he shouldn’t be on the site if he can’t handle it.