Fringe Benefits

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"Of course."

They kissed, another tongue-flapper, and they held it an extra beat for emphasis.

"Max, would you like to ride with us when I drive Haley to the train? I mean, if you can take the afternoon off."

"Sure, I can do that, just have to move a couple things around. I'd like to go along and see her off."

He kissed her once again, a short one, then he gathered up the rest of his clothes and left.

----

"Jesus, what happened to you?" Mona said with alarm.

After Max left, Mona had fallen back to sleep for forty-five minutes and woke happy and refreshed. She showered, then put on her robe and went to the kitchen to make coffee. She was pouring her first cup when Haley entered the kitchen. She looked rode hard and put away wet and had two dark welts on her neck.

"I feel like I was hit by a truck," Haley said.

"Dick did that to you?" Mona said, gently touching Haley's neck.

"Who else? What an asshole, I can't believe you're even seeing that guy. I got so pissed, I told him to get the hell out late last night, and if he didn't I was gonna start screaming. Look at this."

Haley pulled her t-shirt down off her shoulder and showed her mother her flesh wound, all puffy and red.

"Oh My God! That's it, he's history."

"Exactly. I never thought going to bed with him would be a blood sport. Did he ever get rough with you?"

"Nothing like that. If he had I would have kicked him out too. What a jerk. Are you all right?"

"I'll be okay. More mad than anything." Haley poured herself a coffee.

"So, I guess swapping men didn't work out so well, huh?"

"Not for me, not by a long shot. But it was different, that's for damn sure. How about you?"

"Uh, I guess you could say my experience was different, too. Yes, different. That's a good way to put it."

----

Max showed up at one p.m. Friday as Mona had suggested. The train station was located seventy-five miles from the beach. They needed to be there by three o'clock to buy the ticket and catch the train, and then Haley would have a long overnight ride back to school.

He rang the bell and Mona answered the door, ushered him in with an unhesitant kiss on his lips.

"The car's already packed," she said. "I hope the weather holds off. I'd hate to drive through a monsoon for an hour and a half. The weather report said there's a heavy storm front heading that way from the southwest."

They waited for a minute or two, then Haley appeared. She wore black jeans and a white turtle neck up to her chin, which Max thought was odd, and quite different from the way she'd dressed all summer. He leaned to give her a kiss, which she accepted without much reciprocation. Mona grabbed three bottles of water out of the fridge and said, "Let's go."

Mona drove, Haley rode shotgun, Max was in the back. The conversation was forced, mostly Mona and Max asking Haley questions about school, classes, activities, whatever, and not getting much in response. As they drove westward, they could see dark, ominous clouds up ahead.

After about an hour they hit the rain. It was light at first, but soon became heavy, making visibility difficult, and the wind was kicking up. Mona turned on the radio and they listened to reports of massive rainfall, possible flooding and traffic jams. They were driving right into it.

Mona was a nervous wreck by the time they reached the train depot.

"Pull up front," Max said. "You guys go on in, I'll park the car. No sense everybody getting drenched." He unloaded Haley's three bags from the trunk, watched them enter the station and got back in the car. He pulled the car into a lot about a block away, fed the meter and made a run for it.

Back in the station, he found mother and daughter seated on a bench. "Train's running a little behind," Mona said.

"Hurry up and wait," Max said, and sat down beside Haley. "Did they say how long?"

"Not long, only twenty minutes or so."

"Did you get your ticket?" he asked Haley. She nodded and held the ticket up for him to see.

After a few minutes of tentative small talk there was an announcement for her train. They all stood up, said their goodbyes, hugged, kissed. The kiss Max received was a glancing blow, and his hug was more given than received. He could feel it was over between them. Then Haley picked up her bags, one in each hand and the smaller one hanging from her shoulder, turned and headed for the train.

"Call me when you get in," Mona called.

"Me too," Max added.

But Haley didn't seem to hear.

----

"You wait here, stay dry," Max said, under the canopy at the front of the depot. "I'll go get the car and pick you up." Before Mona could reply he ran off into the downpour.

A short while later Max pulled the car up in front of Mona and she got in. Then he drove back into the rain and down the street. After a quarter mile he stopped at a traffic light. Making a left would put them on the highway east, and back to the beach.

It was dark and stormy, black clouds, thunder, lightning bolts nearby. Max watched through the windshield as wind-aided wavelets of rainwater swirled across the street. He didn't look forward to a long, hairy drive through this kind of slop.

They sat in the car waiting for the light to change, staring ahead. Across the highway before them was an old motel. The place was lighted up and an orange neon sign flashed VACANCY in the inky afternoon.

Mona put her hand on his and said, "Are you thinking what I'm thinking?"

"I think so," Max said as the light turned green.

He pressed the gas pedal, made a left and then a quick right into the parking lot and pulled right up to the office.

"Right?" he asked.

"Right," she said.

He got out of the car and ran into the office. Mona watched through the window as he checked them in. After a few minutes he ran back out and jumped in the car. He drove about forty yards and parked in front of their room. They had no luggage, so they hopped out of the car and onto the covered walkway. Max unlocked the door, flipped on a light and they went in and shut the door behind them as quickly as possible to get out of the weather.

The motel was two buildings separated by a protected breezeway between them. Max had gotten them the room on the end of the first building, right next to the breezeway.

Close to the ice machine.

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AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

Make part 2 of pictures of lily please it’s still a cliffhanger

General_OGeneral_Oabout 1 year ago

Hope you turn this into another story really enjoyed reading it

Bargyn1Bargyn1about 1 year ago

And why not.

Interesting story.

Boyd PercyBoyd Percyabout 1 year ago

Nice work if can get it and you can get it if you try!

5

6King6Kingabout 1 year ago

⭐⭐⭐ This story was ok until the end of summer jacuzzi. Max and Haley hadn't made any long term plans to this point, but if Haley wanted to end it by fucking the creeper, Dick, instead of Max that should have been Max's clue to bail. He could also have payed Mona the compliment of offering to call her the following week if they were both interested. Haley had insolently pulled her name out of the hat by fucking creeper, so no lines crossed after that.

Sex4lf57Sex4lf57about 1 year ago

I love Swampcooler stories! Though the ending felt a little rushed, the story was awesome! Five stars and a favorite point!

Comentarista82Comentarista82about 1 year ago

I was glad to see you'd written another story, and eager to read it; you've had some really good past entries, so I took the plunge here.

Interesting idea with Max, as it was clear you employed the story to set him up to fix things and to be good at it. Nothing wrong with exploring Max's angst over trying to find his field, and you guided his personal exploration to end in the perfect predicament (for him, at least). The story didn't feel rushed with him dashing about to find his particular calling, and you invested sufficient detail to lay out his path. All told, you constructed the tale with a solid start.

Can't fault his initial "play the field," where he basically sampled the "cuisine," and this part didn't feel rushed either, as while you kind of plowed through some ladies, you slowed down to describe Haley, and I appreciated that decision: to show Max had learned and applied that knowledge proved at that point he wasn't just a "horn dog" out to have sex with everything female that moved. You took your time to develop Haley's and Max's relationship, and although usually the 2nd date isn't expected to be the one the girl "puts out" on, you'd invested enough to make it work. Where the story started to lose me was Max basically losing his head over Mona. Now, nothing wrong with him checking her out...BUT once the tale devolved into swapping at the jacuzzi, the narrative ditches keeping Haley and Max together, and instead posits Haley WANTING to sample what Dick offered? This despite Haley KNOWING he desperately wanted to get into her panties and despite the fact it creeped her out? Mona even commented similarly at the jacuzzi, but then both couples part with a different guy??? This development threw all logic out the window: Haley hated how he roughed her up and Mona has the nerve to be offended? Very non-sequitur and completely unexplained; you even set up Dick for failure because attentive readers would have associated his name as how he would behave--and so he did! Then to have Haley basically blame Max for Dick's behavior AND for the story to end Max's and Haley's relationship so capriciously...really? I liken that to hitting a brick wall 3-feet thick at 60 and expecting passengers to survive the impact without seatbelts and no airbags. The only logical conclusion would have been to create a story space to have Max and Haley discuss what happened (with Max mostly listening and forgiving, because this backed the idea of them communicating and listening to each other well before), then having them reconcile, with them later reconnecting and reuniting stronger. Before they reconciled, Mona could have consoled Max, won him over, then started a "fling" with him, with then Haley returning, wanting to patch things up: such an ending would have flowed well and added up; the one here skidded to a screeching halt, with Max and Mona riding off into the sunset, to have more sex and to hell with Haley? It's almost like you stretched yourself thin, then just wanted to conclude it, everything be damned. I've enjoyed many stories you've written before, and I cannot think of a single one that ended like this.

Had the story continued tracking with the positive comments above, it was heading for a 5; with the abrupt and illogical ending, those items lowered the rating to 3. It really left me scratching my head.

1thaiguy1thaiguyabout 1 year ago

Awesome hope there is a chapter 2

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